With curiosity in his mind and an enthused spirit he went on unravelling the veils of future. Little did he know back then, his path will inspire generations. He trotted far away into the profundity of time, into an intoxicating space away from Jeny.
Of course, the woman who walked away.
He knew he was walking towards purity, towards sanity, towards heaven. A man with a broken heart is destined to go towards heaven. Hell is something he had already walked through.
He never thought he could walk so far...........far away from her. But when anger and envy triggers your determination, even the shackles of tear drops can’t sustain you. Not that he didn’t want to get her back. He did. Life does give you a second chance. But, would you want to make the same mistake twice. He just couldn’t trust her. He walked over the stains, but looked back to forgive his footsteps.
He did try. His words couldn’t break her. How can you break something that does not have a heart? He moved on. The thought of family and friends did moisten his eyes. But now that his hands weren’t trying to hold on to something, they wiped the moisture.
Recuperation didn’t cross his mind. One reason why he could walk so far.
Now, he has walked quite a distance. To an unknown vicinity. The atmosphere is so exhilarating that it’s almost like a dream. But he knows he’s not dreaming. Because, every footstep hurts. The pain didn’t close his eyes. The lonesome traveller has walked away from weariness. He knew reality hurts but he wouldn’t rather dream.
Stay awake. Stay alert. Life is too short to make the same mistake twice.
Today he walks alone. Family and friends are nothing but tear drops. He treasures them. He collects it in a barrel. Often drinks it. Every drop, every gravel, the misty future, the darkening past, the bewildered present simply tells him one thing
KEEP WALKING!!!
10 comments:
A dark piece to read.....but well versed...Cheers!
The colour of the heart utters the word. ;)
well written... hope Johnnie is able to stop to take people along with him to where he is walking to... :)
good one Joy....but too sad..though very true for every individual..!! very well written..!!
Very well written.. Good work!! Keep walking.. I mean writing :)
out of all the stuff which u have written so far. i find this one the best. kudos! very well written. i wished i had written this. Liked the last para...
'family and friends are nothing but tear drops. He treasures them. He collects it in a barrel. Often drinks it. Every drop, every gravel, the misty future, the darkening past, the bewildered present simply tells him one thing.. keep walking'
JOY HO!
awesome psychedelic stuff dude !!! keep it up...
eta ki mod kheye/ na kheye? Good one... next one should on "cheers to life?
"A man with a broken heart is destined to go towards heaven. Hell is something he had already walked through."
very nice indeed...loved it...loved the pathos n the plight !!!! Wish u wrote few more lines...so as bhaskar wrote ~
JOY HO !!!!
great buddy...!!!!
very true....
hard to swallow but easy to nod....!!!!
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