Ye hain Hindustaan meri jaan
Yahan dakshin hai uttar se anjaan
Yahan har rajya ki hai ek apni bhasha
Bhool jaate hai, ki kya hai rashtriya bhasha
Sharab ke vigyapan se hume sankoch hai
Par ‘dry day’ ke din har gali, bas isi ki khoj hai
Rashtriya geet ka ched-chad inhe pasand nahin
Par usey likhne waale ka naam inhe yaad nahin
Koi Assam ka banda dhang ki hindi bol de
To hum kehte hai “Bhaiya tum Assam ke ho nahin sakte”
Ma aur behno ko hum bahut izzat dete
Afsoos, unka sabse zyaada zikr hum gaaliyon mein hi karte
Sarkaar ko gaali dene mein koi peeche nahin rehta hai
Par election ke din vote dene bas sattawan pratishad hi jaata hai
Mirza Gaalib aur Munshi Premchand ko hum sab hai jaante
Par bache aaj bhi T.S. Elliot ki zubaan hai kehte
Angrezi filmo se chapne ko ‘Copycat’ kehte hai
Par hindi filmo ki duniya ko aaj bhi ‘Bollywood’ kehte hai
Jinn videshi khiladiyon ka hum tiraskaar karte hain
IPL mein unhi ke liye hum seeti bajate hain
Basath saal pehle humne angrezo ko nikaala tha
Ye keh kar ki ‘wo yahan ke nahin hai’
Aaj har state se koi nikal raha hai
Yeh sochkar ki ‘wo yahan ke nahin hai’
24 comments:
Nice One
its too gud a shayari dude...awesum man...i wud love to see more of these...
what do you mean by 'rashtriya bhasha'?
India doesn't have a national language as per the constitution.... Hindi and English are just official languages... but apart from that good work...
Ya i know its just the official language. All i meant was, people just believe in speaking in their own language. even when there is someone who doesn't understand their language, they wont speak the common language.
"Basath saal pehle humne angrezo ko nikaala tha
Ye keh kar ki ‘wo yahan ke nahin hai’
Aaj har state se koi nikal raha hai
Yeh sochkar ki ‘wo yahan ke nahin hai’ ".... ye sabse behtareen hissa hai aapki kavita ka!!! acha likhne pe shubhkamnayein!!
parantu kaafi ache se burai kar di aapne indians ki!
oops.. i mean bhartiya logon* ki!!!
Interesting...Indians criticising India and other Indians is not uncommon but the humour and insight you have diplayed id praise-worthy.
Nice one. acha hain.
sahi hai yaar !!! great to see write such amazing scripts !! keep me updated of all ur posts.
thanks ppl
its 'abnormal' ha ha
oshadharon i mean ;)
bapok diyecho bss
kya sarcasticly diyecho bss
bhalo
keep it up
dhonnobaad sir
Ek behtarin koshish hai..jise padne ke baad shayad har koi sochne par mazboor ho jaaye ...aur jahan tak nazam ka sawal hai ..to thodi bahut gunjaish hai ussey aur bhi khoobsoorat banane ke liye ... ..kuch haraf kam karke bhi nazam ka taasir waisa hi rakha ja sakta hai ..maslan aapka hi ek mishra " Sharab ke vigyapan se hume sankoch hai
Par ‘dry day’ ke din har gali, bas isi ki khoj hai"
ye ho sakta hai .."Sharab ke vigyapan se humein sankoch hai
Par ‘dry day’ ke bas isi ki khoj hai"
par ye meri soch hai ..kyunki har abid ya sukhanwar ka ek apna hi andaz hota hai ...
Baki aapk "Maa" wala misra hum sab ke mun par ek qarara sa tamacha hai jo har sheh haqeeqat hai ...uske liye aapki jitni bhi tarif ki jaaye kam hai ...aur hum bas itna hi kehna chahenge ....
"Apni koshishon ko yu.N hi rawani dete rehne, har mode pe koi nai kahani kehte rehna ..har bache har budhe ka ek khawab lekar..jaha.N ko apne hunar ki nishani dete rehna "
shukriya dost. aapke saath rehne ka taasir hai ye.
Tiwari bhaiyya perfectionist hain.
Mere hisaab se sachchi baatein dil khol kar bol dena hi kaafi hai achchi likhaai ke liye.
Us hisaab se yeh post Joy ka best post hai ab tak.
Utsav bhai sahi likha ...humare hisab se bhi yehi hai ...
Nice one bro... Indeed,a nice compilation of most of the factors, which are obstructing us to succeed... And especially, the last paragraph...All these things will make our country weak from inside...
Wel, really a nice work from your side to highlight these serious facts in such a nice way..
Keep it up!!! :)
gr8 job man !!! Last paragraph was the superb.It was touchy.keep it up.
@ Austy - thanx bro, its tough to battle Tiwary when it comes to Hindi
@ KC - m sure u do understand the emotions, u know what we've been through
@ Bhajji - m glad u found it emotional
Gud yaar serious but truth hey ausum yaar very deep thinking
there is a hell lot of truth in this poem .. a great job , i have to say this.. If at all we are hoping for things to change , probably we should change first.. When we change we can try bringing change in this society.. A good initiative joy bhaiya
yar kyun badnaam kar rahe ho hum sabko aur apne aap ko........
as in v all r also bhartiya
waah .. superb :) i likeSSSS it !! ek alag he andaaz hai Gaalib ..
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