Viraaniyon mei goonjti thi dastak
Akelepan ko door karti thi dastak
Jinki aawaz se khushnuma thi mehfil
Aaj unhi yaadon mei uljhi hui dastak
Har mod har simt fir fanaa ho gayi
Adaavat se bhari jo aayi thi dastak
Wo ulfat thi ya thi zindagi ki kashmakash
Aaj bhi chaunk jaata hun jab aati hai dastak
Kabhi hum bhi shumar the deewano ki ginti mei
Par aaj koi nahin deta iss dil pe dastak
10 comments:
awesome!
thanx!!!
sahi hai re ... but viraaniyoo is not the right word i guess ... but , i will say "waah waah .. "waah waah"
it could have been viraaniyaan
but it doesnt suit the tense
wow.. joy.. kya gehri meaning hain.. its really awesome.. i m feeling proud to be ur di.
phataphati! the last line is very gud. isse jyada comment karne ke liye i ll charge. :)
@ di - thanx di
@Bhaskie - dhonnobaad, kundi laagar pore ei shob kotha mone aashe. tomar obostha ta bhebe likhechi
arre bhai... kisiko mauka denge toh koi dastak karega na!!!
dastak karega nahin dastak dega
gud one..... Tanha dil pe tanhaayion ki dastak....
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